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@@ -520,12 +520,11 @@ but really all we're in a position to mean by that are claims about the result
 of the complex expression semantically depending only on this, not on that. A
 demon evaluator who custom-picked the evaluation order to make things maximally
 bad for you could ensure that all the semantically unnecessary computations got
-evaluated anyway. We don't have any way to prevent that. Later,
-we'll see ways to *semantically guarantee* one evaluation order rather than
-another. Though even then the demonic evaluation-order-chooser could make it
-take unnecessarily long to compute the semantically guaranteed result. Of
-course, in any real computing environment you'll know you're dealing with a
-fixed evaluation order and you'll be able to program efficiently around that.
+evaluated anyway. We don't yet know any way to prevent that. Later, we'll see
+ways to *guarantee* one evaluation order rather than another. Of
+course, in any real computing environment you'll know in advance that you're
+dealing with a fixed evaluation order and you'll be able to program efficiently
+around that.
 
 In detail, then, here's what our v5 lists will look like:
 
@@ -593,15 +592,15 @@ detail](http://okmij.org/ftp/Streams.html#enumerator-stream).
 >	
 >	Well, the right fold of `f` over a list `[a;b;c;d;e]`, using starting value z, is:
 >	
->		f a (f b (f c (f d (f e z))))
+>			f a (f b (f c (f d (f e z))))
 >	
->	The left fold on the other hand starts combining `z` with elements from the left. `f z z` is then combined with `b`, and so on:
+>	The left fold on the other hand starts combining `z` with elements from the left. `f z a` is then combined with `b`, and so on:
 >	
->		f (f (f (f (f z a) b) c) d) e
+>			f (f (f (f (f z a) b) c) d) e
 >	
 >	or, if we preferred the arguments to each `f` flipped:
 >	
->		f e (f d (f c (f b (f a z))))
+>			f e (f d (f c (f b (f a z))))
 >	
 >	Recall we implemented v3 lists as their own right-fold functions. We could
 >	instead implement lists as their own left-fold functions. To do that with our