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diff --git a/from_list_zippers_to_continuations.mdwn b/from_list_zippers_to_continuations.mdwn
index 59185df5..dcd11cec 100644
--- a/from_list_zippers_to_continuations.mdwn
+++ b/from_list_zippers_to_continuations.mdwn
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ to continuations is to re-functionalize a zipper.  Then the
 concreteness and understandability of the zipper provides a way of
 understanding an equivalent treatment using continuations.
 
-Let's work with lists of `char`s for a change.  To maximize readability, we'll
-indulge in an abbreviatory convention that "abSd" abbreviates the
-list `['a'; 'b'; 'S'; 'd']`.
+Let's work with lists of `char`s for a change.  We'll sometimes write
+"abSd" as an abbreviation for  
+`['a'; 'b'; 'S'; 'd']`.
 
 We will set out to compute a deceptively simple-seeming **task: given a
 string, replace each occurrence of 'S' in that string with a copy of
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ the closest `'#'`.  This would allow our task to simulate delimited
 continuations with embedded `prompt`s (also called `reset`s).
 
 The reason the task is well-suited to the list zipper is in part
-because the list monad has an intimate connection with continuations.
+because the List monad has an intimate connection with continuations.
 We'll explore this next.